Post 01: Introduction

 Hi, my name is Youngjun Park, and I'm currently dual enrolling this English 1101 class. I'm originally from South Korea, but I have lived in England before moving to the U.S. in 2020. Personally, it's interesting to see the differences between the cultures and the differences in language, especially the accents in here and back in England. My area of interests are playing soccer and working out, physical activities in general. From this class, I hope to gain a deeper understanding about effective writing, and I'm very eager to learn about this class and all of you. I hope we can make a wonderful semester together. Thank you!

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  1. keith.hamonOctober 18, 2024 at 5:25 AM

    Thanks for the introduction, and welcome to the class. I hope my accent comes through my writing. I also love soccer and played my last match at age 66. I scored! Scoring at 66 is so much more gratifying than when I was young, but it's always appreciated.

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